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for The Baroness’ Birthday

by rejerito

person ZivaJade
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Drunk Jack is hilarious!!! Poor Will. I think he isn't having such a good time as Jack and Lizzie. I start seriously doubting that Jack will be able to get the jewel he initially come for.
Great story!
person ZivaJade
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The banter between Will and Jack is too funny. But the job isn't goung to well. I don't think it's very wise of Elisabeth to try and get Jack drunk.
person Caitlin
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So I'm kinda in love with this story.
Thought i'd let ya know^_^
person ZivaJade
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. So: Will has to seduce the lady,Elisabeth doesn't really want to steal anything and Jack and Will can't stop arguing for a minute. I hope that won't end in a desaster. I'm so curious what Jack wants to steal!
person PirateLover
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is going along great. im definitely interested. just wondering when all the smut is gonna come. cuz im a smut lover :) overall though, i think ur doing fine. keep up the good work and keep those chapters coming in at the same rate that they are! have a good one.