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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was pretty good, but awkward. Like, the fact that she didn't have any clue about menstration or development but she knew all about sex was odd. And Aayla randomly coming in was odd too. Personal opinion is that it could have used some more development. with the characters.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow love it update soon
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice fic! I hope you continue, I'd really like to see where this goes! :D
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice try at this new pairing.. nv seen it before though.. would be a nice story if u continue writing nicely