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for Twisted Games

by Suryallee7104

person jgood
schedule January 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Love this story and cant wait to read more, please update 

person Rae37
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love your stories ^______^ I really hope you update this even though it's been a while. Thank you soooo much!!
person Rae37
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love ur stories sooooo much, please keep writing them ^_^ Hopefully you'll update this story.
person jessica
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far, and i can't wait to find out how Marco responded to Pauls question. I hope you continue this as it has the potential to be a great story.
person Lina
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
person Lina
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!! Are you going back to update the fate story????
person Witty Nickname
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I think I speak for everyone when I say that we're enjoying your 'little insanity' lol!

Good job, I really like this story..... just one question though: how many Lost Boy stories do you have?! Lol! Not that it's a bad thing, because it's not - far from it actually. I love all of 'em. But just how many do you have?

Geez, I wish my muse worked like yours... mine is very lazy. :o)
person smashthemirror
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it! totally love it! guh..you do intimacy so well. love the marco/sam deal, and of course I love how you write paul.

I'm working on writing, I swear...I'm working late weekends though, and apparently my dwayne muse has decided to be no help whatsoever. And I'm at one of his big parts, too. Bah. Dumb vamps, never any help when you need them to be. You'd think he'd be more cooperative given the contents of the chapter, but noooo...;)

keep up the good work!
person TooMuchTooLate
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, i get use to the typos so fast that i don't even notice them. You write so well and the story is so great that i can't help but anything you put up here. I really really like this one though, even a bit more then the twisted fate one. It is more simplistic in the number of characters and i enjoy that (Don't get me wrong, i LOVE both) I just really want more of this one too. So please don't take it down and could you write more. I need good Lost Boy stories to look foward to. ::Makes sad puppy face:: Keep of the good work.
person trytohangon
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot. Having said that I think you might need a beta. If you can't find anyone let me know and I can help with a bit of rewording.