rate_review Reviews

Wow, even when it's not really a part of the main storyline, it still manages to be quite awesome.

I'm curious. Your last chapter of the main storyline ended with Nala about to tell her scar story. Is this the story she would tell?

Quite a story indeed, your ability to put so much detail into your writing really stands out here. The torture sequence, was indeed, quite torturous, I could almost feel those wounds myself. Amazing that Nala hasn't lost her mind yet, sure she is unstable, but hasn't completely snapped. And Jeebah didn't die (yet?), so it'll be interesting to see when/how Nala gets her final revenge on him. :)

I myself am alright with you putting the "side stories" in their own category rather than as a part of the main storyline. If the length of this chapter was any indication, then I think it is for the best, as you would probably have had to devote one or maybe two chapters of the main storyline to just this tale.

Well, anyways, brilliant work as always, and I can't wait to read more of all your stories. :)

I really like this idea. I do so love background stories. It adds so much to the characters. Like flashbacks, only with much more detail. I can't wait to see who else gets a story in here. Maybe Sya and why he studies humans the way he does? And Pakka of course, you already hinted to that, so i'm going to hold you to that! I so can't wait... :)