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for When the Rum Runs Out

by Ladykohl

person shel
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww! that was so cute!
...Im a bit worried about why jack was rowing back to port royal without her...
this is a really great story. update really soon, k?
person heartjd
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaah, dark angst, wonderful. I hope you'll post soon.
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I'm addicted!
person Nessa
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im not one to usualy review... I'm not sure why..probably cos I'm not a writer but a huge reader.
I liked your first chapter very much and look forward to reading more.
person howlongmustiwait
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful first chapter! Can't wait to read more!
person sparrows_swann
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really refreshing to see such mature writing. I very much enjoyed reading this and I can't wait for more chapters. You keep Jack and Elizabeth very much in character, in my opinion and it's all believable.
person rejerito
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for next chapter!

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