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Would you be willing to write like a follow on? Even if it is crap lol, because I liked the story so much and the idea that Elizabeth dies, but I would love to see your interpretation if they ever met up again, ie. What happens, whats said.
Email me please :) x

P.s-I was the first "chelsea" that replied above, just so you knew my feelings on the story (and didnt wanna type it again hehe)

I fucking LOVED this story!
From the middle on I was cursing the story and its characters, hating what they were going through yet I couldn't pulled my eyes away! I hated it for making me cry! *yes I did cry*
Its so incredibly well written.
I'm so grateful that ur bringing liz back, that last paragraph you tell us brought me from tears to excitment. I cannot wait for the sequel.
You should be proud of your story.

Looking forward to the sequel,
Lauren

I just wanted to finally (only just worked out how to sign up lol) tell you what an AMAZING story this is. I have honestly never cried so much over a story in my life. It was truly fabulous! You captured the characters so well and got all the emotions in there. I seriously cant get over how it made me feel, I could literally feel everything Jack felt; his happiness, his sorrow, his heartbreak, his anger. It was magnificant. Im still crying now lol. The last chapter broke my heart. And if theres going to be a sequel (or is there already one?) I would love to read it. I wish Lizzie didnt die but then the story wouldnt have been as powerful =[ And still the tears come....It was just the way Jack couldnt admit his feelings to her until it was too late. And that feels awful thinking the person you love will never know how you feel. Too bad Lizzie couldnt come back alive lol, Im sure Jack would just love to tell her how he is feeling because you can just imagine how guilty/heartbroken he feels leaving her to die alone never letting her know he loved her. Again great story, lemme know if you write any sequels. You are a spectacular writer!
chelsea xxxx

Hey! T wanted to tell you that you have an absolutely terriffic story! I saw The Libertine also and realized that Jack and John Wilmont have a little similar qualities, but I believe that John is Jack to the 50th power! He scares me a little, but anyway I can't wait for part two to this story (please let there be a part 2! I've told my friends about your story!) I've enjoyed it and I love your writing. You are a terriffic writer! Great job! Take care!

Utterly asmazing! Is there a sequel!?

Amazing. Beautifully written and just amazing. I can't wait for the sequel.

I absolutely love this fic! You have captured Jack and Elizabeth's essence down to a tee! I cannot wait to read on to the next chapter! Great Job! I will DEFINITELY read your upcoming POTC fics and also the other one you wrote!

I hope you write a sequel to this story, there would be many great storylines :)

I have to say that I have never once cried while reading fanfiction until today. And I bawled.... that was wonderful and I hope there is more where it came from.

I loved this story, absolutely loved it. I thought you caught Jack perfectly, and I can't wait till you add more to your other story so I can start reading it without writhing in my seat for the next chapter. You did a fantastic job all around.