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Beautiful, dark and so sad. I Loved it. The end made me cry, which is a big deal in a story (for me, anyway) I mean, it's easy to cry with movies with all the sad music and stuff, but with writing it's much harder to portray the emotions and everything, and you did it very well. Wonderfull!

Totally breaking my heart, here. Ironically, their "love me/ don't love me" falls in the same vein of something I was recently musing (ah, when personal life imitates art and comes out in the writing... bugger). Anyway. Really well done, I'm almost afraid to read the last chapter.

This is an amazing story. Have no fear, your Jack and Elizabeth are spot on. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.

Ohhhhhhh next chapter sooon pleeeeeeeeeaaaase!!!!!!

speechless.

best.fic.ever.

update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow. GREAT! Please update soon!! I can't wiat to finish reading this. Awesome fic. I love it.

omg omg omg.....you know your last chapter....it made me cry....so...much...like alot. omg. that was SO sad. and don't worry about staying in character, becuase i believe you are bringing out the darker side of jack that noone has properly seen. this was amazing, you have such a good talent i obviously envy. beautfiully wriiten. oh i can't waste for the next chapter....i hope jack comes to his sense and admits his feelings to her....oh this is such a good fic!!!!! i love you for aking this!!xxxxx

Have I mentioned how well written this is?? Surely I have.

Favorite line this time around: "Lizzie - his Lizzie... was not his Lizzie." It reads well and is in character. [no idea if the html tags will show in the reviews]

Dark Jack ways leaves me with mixed feelings because we're so unused to seeing him serious and threatening--it's easy to forget he's a serious pirate, and when we're reminded, it can to feel uncomfortable, almost like it's out of character and awkward, but looking over this, right now, I think you're pretty in character with Jack. Though sometimes he might drop into a too good to be true nature, for the most part, he's our Jack Sparrow, so well done, and keep up the work.

I have a feeling you may have woven some misdirection into this tale, so I'll be interested to see if you go with the avenue we're all suspecting or something quite different. Looking forward to the conclusion, and hopefully more awesome stories from you in the future.

i freaking love this story. please update soon!

Oh wow! Im so excited about this chapter. You did an excellent job in staying in touch with the character. I always imagined Jack for his character to be like that in AWE after lizzie chains him up. Its still staying in character, Jack is still Jack, but we see him in a different light. He has depth in his character, and I think it should develop as time goes by and the situations he goes through. So, again, great job! Dont be scared lol, be proud of yourself!

I really canot wait for the next chapter. What would Reed do to lizzie?! eek! Please continue! I love your story. I'll be anxiously waiting and checking everyday till you post :)