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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! *follows Jack to the brig*
I knew it! I knew it!!!!
Update soon please!
I knew it! I knew it!!!!
Update soon please!
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so glad you updated and yet sad that the story is coming to an end. :( Another wonderful chapter. I still hope for a happy-ish ending! Please...
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH wow. This is great. I can't wait to read more.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. You're CRUEL! You can't leave us hanging like that *puppy eyes*.
I really loved the Jack/Liz exchange in the bed.
Your Jack is perfect, he's exactly like I think he would be in that kind of situation. I love it when he's dark and heartbroken..
And for ”They speak Spanish better.”, you took that from Johnny, right? ;)
I really loved the Jack/Liz exchange in the bed.
Your Jack is perfect, he's exactly like I think he would be in that kind of situation. I love it when he's dark and heartbroken..
And for ”They speak Spanish better.”, you took that from Johnny, right? ;)
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you write Jack perfectly.
And thank you, you made me cry! You better post that next chapter before I keelhaul you!!!
I hope Lizzie's alright... but something tells me that she's not going to be...
And thank you, you made me cry! You better post that next chapter before I keelhaul you!!!
I hope Lizzie's alright... but something tells me that she's not going to be...
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, wow! That's a twist I wasn't expecting. I think I see where this is headed, and I don't like it one bit. haha I can't seem to stop reading, though! You write so well! Please update soon!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY! I can guess but I don't want to - UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope this isnt the end of the story. It looks so. But its such a great story. Its sad and pleasent at the same time. If there are more possible chapters or sequels please do so. If you plan on more Jack and Elizabeth please post. You're a great writer. I wish you the best and hope you write more.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot!!!! Great story!
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don''t usually leave comments but I've fallen in love with this story. It's sad, it's beautiful, it's funny, it's hot and it is very well written! I have a horrible feeling about this one though... :( I will comment more as the fic unfolds, please update speedily. :o)