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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh.... I think I know what happens those months later.... And if it is what I think, I really don't like it!
Jack wanted to use the cruelest punishment for Reed, he really loves her....
And the end of the third part is just *thud!*
Keep going! I'm loving this story!
Jack wanted to use the cruelest punishment for Reed, he really loves her....
And the end of the third part is just *thud!*
Keep going! I'm loving this story!
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is so Yummy, Plese update soon,
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. god. This is so fuckin' great. *fans herself*
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was hesitant to read this at first, but you really surprised me. It's wonderful, beautiful, and I will be delighted to see more, even though I have a feeling this is going to give me that good cry I've been needing.
The only CC I can offer is that sometimes the POV changes a bit rapidly and is somewhat confusing as you switch third limited in the same scene. Can't give much else than that.
The only CC I can offer is that sometimes the POV changes a bit rapidly and is somewhat confusing as you switch third limited in the same scene. Can't give much else than that.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! It's heartbreaking, beautiful and HOT all at the same time! How did you do that? I LOVE the conversation between Jack and Lizzie when he finally tells her how he got branded. So beautiful and I could actually see that happening...very believable. And I love his desperation in the end when they finally get together....heartbreaking! Ugh, Jack just say you love her!!! You write him REALLY well.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Forgot to sign in... lol)
I am so loving this story. This chapter especially, because it seems so Jack. He would never admit that he loved her, and Elizabeth coming to him, saying those things... GAH!
I love this story! *still addicted* Update soon or I'll die! Well, maybe not die, but I'd be very put out for a bit. ^_^
I am so loving this story. This chapter especially, because it seems so Jack. He would never admit that he loved her, and Elizabeth coming to him, saying those things... GAH!
I love this story! *still addicted* Update soon or I'll die! Well, maybe not die, but I'd be very put out for a bit. ^_^
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more please!!!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uggh Elizabeth!! Why did you go and marry the whelp?!
Great chapter update soon! I love your story! *still addicted*
Great chapter update soon! I love your story! *still addicted*
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jack.... Elizabeth married to the whelp just breaks his heart....
More! More! MORE!!! I'm loving this story!
More! More! MORE!!! I'm loving this story!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chap!
And I'm sure I won't be disappointed ;)
And I'm sure I won't be disappointed ;)