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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update this story soon maybe you could try the suggestion of an orgy with the entire basketball team that sounds so hot oh and again please update soon
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
about time you did a new chappie! I WAS ABOUT TO EXPLODE THERE AT THE END! AWESOME...CONTINUE PLEASE!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT KEEP WRITING. HOPE YOU DO ANYWAY
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD...YOU WERE GOING SO GOOD SO PLEASE DON'T LEAVE US HANGING WITH CHAD AND TROY HEADED OFF TO BED! I'M BEGGING YOU!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg i love the story the chad and troy pairing or as i say "choy" as i like to say is brilliant and i could never finf then i found this work of genius.i never really thought of troy and fack though cuz i the yaoi stories with troy and ryan always paints jack to be the playmakers gay-bashing father!!
but it works on so many levels!!
but it works on so many levels!!
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is one great story, update soon please!!!!!!
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really need more description. Try...
"As Troy shot load after load of sticky, white seamen into Chad's soft mouth..."
Trust me, your readers will enjoy it so much more.
"As Troy shot load after load of sticky, white seamen into Chad's soft mouth..."
Trust me, your readers will enjoy it so much more.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please.
just update!
for the love of god.
ox
just update!
for the love of god.
ox
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is definatly insteresting!
I never thought of looking outside of my regular reading place, but this got my attention, continue please!
Oh, and I think you should have a three way thing, like the door cant be locked or something, or troys dad holds both boys back at the end of practice or something and they have a three way thing in the wash room, in the shower! That would be SO HOT!!^_^
So Please Up-Date Soon!!
I never thought of looking outside of my regular reading place, but this got my attention, continue please!
Oh, and I think you should have a three way thing, like the door cant be locked or something, or troys dad holds both boys back at the end of practice or something and they have a three way thing in the wash room, in the shower! That would be SO HOT!!^_^
So Please Up-Date Soon!!
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep goin it good