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for So Beautifully Shattered

by Pagan

person Anon
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update something soon. You’ve been gone for far too long :~(
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE. I have been waiting patiently for the next chapter and thinking constantly about this story, I really love Succumb and the end justifies the means and was extrmemly happy that you were writing sequel about a suitless Anakin. Please update soon, I need to know what happens desperately.
person Amber
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pagan: This is a juicy story thus far, please advise when you are posting another chapter. I enjoy reading good novels like this.
person LadyReader
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am desperate for you to update, you haven’t abandoned this have you?
person Pagan
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't like replying in my own reviews but short of adding a chapter just to answer the last two or three queries (and thus raising false hopes that a new chapter is out *AND* also inaccurately inflating the story hit count), I don't have much choice. Let me assure everyone that I NEVER abandon a story. Yes, it may take me forever and a day to update due to real life and a raging case of writers block, but I have every intention of continuing with any story that has WIP in it. One of my biggest pet peeves when it comes to the internet and fan fics are those left unfinished. Too many times I've been lured into a story only to find it’s not only incomplete but the author has disappeared. I've always sworn that I will remove a story completely from a site rather than just leave it forever unfinished and abandoned. So, unless I were to die unexpectedly in some freak accident (knock on wood) then this story, and One Coruscant Night, will eventually be updated and finished. At this time I'm just having some plot issues I'm trying to work through. As sometimes happens, I thought I was going to go THIS way and now the characters want to go THAT way, and it's throwing off the entire story. So until I can resolve this, I can't proceed. Believe me, I hate delaying as much as everyone hates waiting. But I want to put out a good story that I'm proud of, and until I can do that I’m afraid the story will remain un-updated. I do appreciate everyone checking in and all the encouragement and support though. It gives me a much needed boost.
person anon
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, Not meaning to be a pest, but are you planing to continue working on this? It's very good.
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So it has been awhile, eh? Seriously, when are you going to update, it seems so long since you last did. Even with just two chapters this story is so interesting, please update.
person Jubilee
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful story and I look forward to seeing more of it ! You captured the thoughts of the characters well, Please write more !!
person RavenNolan
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... so far a good plotline. I love Palpatines ruminations here. I'm hooked. Keep writing.
person ebbyzone
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy all of the fan-fics you have written, but I am especially enjoying this one. I love the description of Palpatine reaching into the force & of his concerns over Vader's loyalty. I look forward to reading your next chapter.