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for James Bond vs. Le Chiffre

by Walesfairy28

schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi together,

thanks for the Review, sorry I am not so good in english. I don´t know exactly when to put Kapitalletters and when not, again sorry. Every kind of Review is still welcome.

Agnetha
person INC
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not to be mean, but why do you continue to capitalize words that are not at the beginning of the sentence, nor a name. It is kind of annoying. I do not know of many self insertion stories that fair well. All I can say is good luck and work on your sentence structure.