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October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heehee. Very funny.
One typo problem - very early on, you've got 'poorly insulted' where you should have 'poorly insulated'.
One typo problem - very early on, you've got 'poorly insulted' where you should have 'poorly insulated'.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. It should have maybe gone farther, or had a second chapter of Olin fucking Ani in his sleep... but very nice. Fun interplay with the characters, nice description.