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for That Real Horizon

by skizzors

person Me Heartie
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The fact Elizabeth said lol made the story the best everrr.

&& I love it.
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT was...AWFUL! Im sorry I dont know if your just a new writer or what but oh god that was horrible!
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but "futile" isn't a feeling...
person anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wtf?
person enfantD
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eccckkk wtf! LOL.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was aweful I hope you ment it that way because you REALLY need to learn how to write.

"Omg, shut the fuck up! lolz" Elizabeth put her hands over her head. <--- Thats my favorite.

I don't even want to know where Gibbs and the monkey came from.
Please, stop now before you hurt yourself.