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for Life After Death

by Chriscent

schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow ilike it i hope you continue it. email me when you add another chapter.
person munchkin
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Chris,

Holy crap!! I almost swallowed my tongue when I was reading the list of towns that Frost had given Sean and saw Vinita, OK on there. Then when you mentioned Bernice ... I didn't know that anyone else even knew there WAS such as place as Bernice, Oklahoma. You're right, though. Nothing more than a wide spot in the road -- but I agree, a particularly beautiful one. I had to laugh when you said that Stacey's middle name was Bernice and how Sean teased her with it. Good one.

I absolutely ADORE this story so far. You have Sean down perfectly. It's like watching a movie slowly reeling off in my head.

I can't wait to see what happens with the little girl. I don't get over to AFF very often but you can bet I'll be checking in more regularly now, so that I can see where you go with this story. Great job.

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Munchkin (an Okie, too)