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for The Deal

by Shalimar

person Wolly
schedule June 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Dear Shalimar , I really loved your fanfiction ! And I love this fandom too ... I would like , if you 'll give me your permission , to translate THE DEAL ( and the others oneshot of this series) in italian , my mother language . We have very few italian stories of AVP , and I would like that Also other fans - who do not understand english very well - are be able to read your work. I hope and wait for your reply , you can contact me at my email adress valeria.cristaldi@live.it ^ _ ^
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
F****** GREAT stuff... Oh, I am SO delighted that I was recommended this..... What beautiful description and characterization...
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incredible story! Hot, scary, sexy. The perfect package. Going quick to read the sequel!
person Adara of Giovanni
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hands down; I LOVE THIS!

I am completely taken by it Shalimar. I love it, love it, LOVE IT. I cannot wait for your next chapter. I will be waiting EVER so patiently.


Adara G.
person Death God Dist
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I liked this story, it was different but still well written. I do hope that you will choose to continue it down the road as I see some great potential here.
person Muse of Scrolls
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...now that's a "military" story. It's so well-written, and I loved some of the narrator's quips. Though she's about to endure something that might not be pleasant (yeah, right), she's still able to make humorous thoughts. And I'm glad he came back for her; I was kind of hoping for something like that in the end. But actually, is this just a one-shot or are you going to continue? It could work either way. Really enjoyed the story, and thank you for sharing.
person Keen
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tight work! This was thoroughly enjoyable! The way you tell a story has a way of just grabbing you and keeping you firmly in place. Love the shout out to J.A. by the way. Big up to mi yard peoples!

Tell me is this a ‘one-shot’? I only ask because it ended with that kind of feel.
person Shyann
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please post more soon..
person myladymystere
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoo-hoo, that's a hot and steamy story !!!!! totally loved it !!!!!
person Nahau
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. I was wondering if you're going to make a second chapter. I think that would be really nice. You're a good wroter and I appreciate the way you give insite to what the main character is thinking.