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you have to write more!!

Excellent first chapter - I hope you continue this story......

*breaths sigh of relief* originality… of sorts. the beginning is like another story on this site and although hes a raping and woman beating pred, he still plays savior saving the damsel-but it’s forgivable since its so entertaining. usually the pred is so docile, gentle and *nutered* at the sight of his ooman lead its nice to see one that is a real bastard.

do me the favor of never writing ‘vagina’ again and tell me what a ‘lizard brain’ is.

A true, lecherous joy to read, chérie, as always... =)

Anon number 1, I'm not sure what you were looking for, but I guess this fic wasn't it. Anon number 2, thank you, thank you! Sara, AntiDolorico, and chancelor22, love you guys, but you already know that! And, wow, Baxter, I'm impressed. You kinda like it even. If it helps you out any, the only reason the Predator takes the woman is that he thinks it's a waste to leave her locked up in that place; he's got better uses for her. That, incidentally, is the kind of thought your lizard brain has. And what's wrong with vagina? I'm real fond of mine! ;-)

It was okay.... I guess

LOVE IT! Again, and again, and again! Must have more... =)

Finally, a Predator that actually has a exophilic kink for having sex with humans. Delish!

Brilliant! You have to write more! You write in a way that's really fun to read and wow for a second there I thought he murdered her afterwards! but I was pleasantly surprised lol :P