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omg. 'stop' melted my brain this melted the rest of me. YOU ARE A GOD OF WRITING!

In the first chapter you made it very clear that Warren had certain requirements. He needed to have sex or make love with people who are fire proof. laya is not fire proof. when you had will explain it to her you had him leave out that part. which gave laya the opening she needed to whore herself to a more handsome, muscular, better lover than her husband. Instead of saying she understood Warren needed Will; she just said she wanted to be a part of it. That may get her off and assuage will's guilt--but she's not fire proof and she's not invulnerable and warren plays very hard and on fire. layla doesn't have super strength and she isn't fire proof so what good is she to Warren?

wow...just...WOW!

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If you don't write more of this I think I might kill someone in frustration. That was HOTT. ALL OF IT.

- M

YAY you updated :bows: thank you so much... :happy sigh: I love your fanfics and have read every single one of them. Though I am prone to just the will/warren ones, this one is simply perfect. Oh, and I was just curious if you were going to do a sequel for "Stop" :melts: now that fanfic is absolutely my favorite.

teehee. see this is what happens when i have loads of stuff to do and really can't be bothered doing it, i end up reading your porn smut. I'm scared for life lol. I don't really know how to review this. All i can say is that i'm glad to see layla finally gets some of the Warren luvin, she was starting to look like a spare part heehee. And it has a nice story to it, they all seem to really care about each other and you have managed to capture that. I also really like how you have linked all your stories together (Heat, WaPiM, sculptures in frost) even though really, they aren't ment to have anything to do with each other. It's fun. BG x

This story is soooo hot. I love it. I can't wait for the next part.

p.s. - I'd like to see even more emotional fall out, and outside reation from the rest of the team.

Gah. This was hotness with just the right ammount of fun and levity thrown in. Plus, loved Warren's explanaination of why he liked guys. And sexual healing hooray! Will was so cute not knowing quite what to do, and Warren was so cute with his gruffness. Also, yea for plants. Well done chica!

I really like your story. can't wait for more

now that was just spectacularly hot.