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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wildly fun, and what a wonderful surprise ending. The cultural interpretation really made the story shine.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Happy New Year!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....Santa can turn invisible. LOL That was so cute. Happy New Year!!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww that was soo cute. Happy Holidays to you too
btw somehow a "d" sneaked into the word challenges in the summmary and an "n" wormed its way into licensing in the disclaimer.
btw somehow a "d" sneaked into the word challenges in the summmary and an "n" wormed its way into licensing in the disclaimer.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this gift. Happy Holidays to you also
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very nice and I want to wish you a Happy Holiday too!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Cute!!! I love it. Good to see that you are still around. I do want to know what is going on with your other fic tho. I really miss those guys! :)
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The 1st time Nalani wrote it? That sounds like an accusation to me. Nalani definitely appears to have no prolem with this story though.
Personally I loved it and laughed all the way through. The image of the Predator trudging through the snow and feeling sorry for himself all because he wants to get laid back home, was very vivid and I can picture everything you write very clearly in my mind. I love the way he misinterprets the festival, his thoughts were plausible and natural. but best of all, I loved that ending - Santa can turn invisible!!!
Well done and Happy Christmas and New Year to you. Please write more.
Kehlan
Personally I loved it and laughed all the way through. The image of the Predator trudging through the snow and feeling sorry for himself all because he wants to get laid back home, was very vivid and I can picture everything you write very clearly in my mind. I love the way he misinterprets the festival, his thoughts were plausible and natural. but best of all, I loved that ending - Santa can turn invisible!!!
Well done and Happy Christmas and New Year to you. Please write more.
Kehlan
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was cute. I really liked this. Thanks and Happy Holidays
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely wonderful. =)
I always love seeing our little Human things through the eyes of a Predator. You did a great job.
Although, his viewpoints that it was a "Great Hunt" ritual is not far off. Our own Human ancestors would do that during the winter as well (The AVP flashback, anyone?). It was a Pagan celebration of the bounty of the harvest as well as hunting. They call it Yule. =)
Now you can update Possibilities, right? ;P
I always love seeing our little Human things through the eyes of a Predator. You did a great job.
Although, his viewpoints that it was a "Great Hunt" ritual is not far off. Our own Human ancestors would do that during the winter as well (The AVP flashback, anyone?). It was a Pagan celebration of the bounty of the harvest as well as hunting. They call it Yule. =)
Now you can update Possibilities, right? ;P