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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I got in a Riddick reading mood and your fic fills that craving. Very nice lead in that sounds realistic. I too didn't think Kyra fit as Jack.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Riddick sounds very much like Riddick and I love your portrayl of the air elemental !!! very well written
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Riddick claiming to want to play tourist. very good scene. Like the tension between the furyans and the elemental.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the new jack is interesting, the story kinda believable...I'm still hooked.
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds awesome.........cant wait to hear more.......pls update!!! XD
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is Amazing so far! The plot is so addicting its not fair, now im craving more!
Though I love Kyra and at first was slightly put off by the therory that Jack and Kyra are 2 different people, your explaination works so well and is an interesting plot twist.
Please continue this amazing story!
Though I love Kyra and at first was slightly put off by the therory that Jack and Kyra are 2 different people, your explaination works so well and is an interesting plot twist.
Please continue this amazing story!
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like so far!!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, vvlove it, love it, vvlove it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love it,
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting and good. Funny to see years old ideas of plot you've had in someone else's story who you've never even talked to. =] Brings to mind that old adage "Nothing new under the sun." But yeah I'd love to read more if you have an inclination to add some more to this. Looking forward to that possibility.
~Merry~
~Merry~
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your take on Jack and Kyra. I never liked her as Jack, either. Way too fem and soft-hearted, despite the skill and toughness. I hope the Lady is looking for a consort/husband, because she and Riddick sound like the perfect match.
Nicely done AU!
Nicely done AU!