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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you began this. I'm so interested in getting to the next part!!!
Kia
Kia
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful, I love it. You have not mentioned what's going on with Jack and Kyra, nice suspense factor. But if you don't update many people will be pissed. This is one of the best written Jack isn't Kyra story I've found. More soon please!!!
Lvoe ya
Lvoe ya
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! It's so good! KEEP GOING! PLEASE?????? Pretty PLEASE?????
very well written...great language....beautiful
very well written...great language....beautiful
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! You can't stop at that! I finally get to the good part and then the chapters run out. Not to mention the fact that someone's finally written a PB fic that seems to have a good exlanation as to why Kyra and Jack aren't the same person. Please continue, I really enjoyed reading the story so far ;)
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to more.
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you write and the idea is really good. I can't wait for Riddick's reaction to Jack. Please update soon.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
5
*mouth hanging open*
Evil cliffhanger at the end... so evil!
Can't wait for more.
*mouth hanging open*
Evil cliffhanger at the end... so evil!
Can't wait for more.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LOVE how you are setting the plot up! PLEASE write more!!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool ^^
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i'm begging for the next chapter. this is good! great build up suspense perfect voice all of it