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4

I like this story so far! Jack is back *woohoo*

So next chapter please ^-^

Wow. I am seriously impressed. Two chapters in and no Riddick yet. Your style is good, characterization dead on. Background filled in neatly, and not boring. I'm looking forward to see how you write Riddick. A morally-aggressive Riddick? And Kyra wasn't Jack? I take it this is going to be an R/J? Interesting. I'm liking very much.

If you can, I'd like notice when you update. Looking foward to reading your Riddick.

~Chriscent