rate_review Reviews

I must say that this first chapter was very well written. It always surprises me to see real writing on this site... but I could tell right away that your writing was going to mature and well thought out. I think you kept both characters wonderfully true to themselves - I can see them both acting this way in this situation. Also, so far, the story as you have written it does not seem to conflict with the rest of the CotBP and I could imagine this fitting in behind the scenes of the storyline.

I was looking for something good and interesting to read today and I found it :-) I hope you will continue very soon!

next chapter Very soon, Please?! Loved it!

I admire your talents, i really do. Excellent job once again. Please update soon!

The lock in doesn't work, no idea why. Anyway, I LOVE your story. Jack trying to behave himself is so hilarious (and kinda cute). But I'm sure Lizzie will find a way to persuade him into more lessons. *grins wickedly*

wow, i absolutely loved it, well seen as you're the author of "Silk" which is another amzing story, I did expect this to be the same and it most definately was! I love the way you describe their feelings, and I also love a wanton Elizabeth, because it's so funny, and probaly quite true. Jack holding back is cute, and you can really feel sorry for him when he's trying his best not to ravish her. I also like how you play it slow, and not rush into things, because i've read many of these island scenes and they go wayyyy to fast for my liking. But you handled this well.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and i can't wait for your next chapter...I stay up really late so maybe i can read it tonight?? hhehehe. well done

Very good! Jack's voice, both speech and thoughts, is very much in character. While Eliz. wasn't portrayed as quite so forward in CBP, I like your version of her. One thing, I think the word that you meant to say is "ravish," not "ravage". 'Ravish' has that sexual connotation that you wanted, but 'ravage' is more 'to damage'.

That was awesome!! I can't wait for more. :-)

Wow. This was fantastic!! I love it.

Well-characterized and well-written, just as all your other fiction is. The tenderness and sheer heat you manage to infuse this pairing with amazes me; yours were the first stories I read for it (yesterday), and I'm already addicted to it. Brilliant. Very, very well done.