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for The Inner Beast

by LaurenGraceJurious

schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww thats sooo sad!!!! i loved it
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grace,
That was the most creative twist I've ever read! Really, I hadn't even expected the epilogue to be taken in Baltus' point of view, or as to what had happened between the couple. I liked how you really created the character of Baltus as more than just a merry father figure from the movie; and, you explained the situation extremely well. This is ending DID not disappoint me, and instead added to the unusuality of the story.