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Fuck! I know who that baby killing merc piece of trash is! I'm Imagining a slow and painfully torturous death for him...hope to see this story completed someday, as it is really good!

I really like this story a lot. I wish you would continue it. I really enjoy your writing 

You write so wonderfully. I loved the tension in the beginning and your sex scenes are downright hot. You are amazing!

OMFG!
IS THERE MORE TO THIS?!
THIS IS INCREDIBLE, AWESOME, WONDERFUL, SEXY, SAD AND SO MUCH MORE...ALL ROLLED INTO ONE BIG HAPPINESS FOR ME TO READ!!!

I really like this story. I've read it several times and only now decided to register...and just to review. I love your character and I loved how Riddicky, Richard B. really was. So great job.

Just wanted to tell you how impressed I was by this fan fic. I really love how you stayed true to Riddick's character. You have a wonderful imagination to be able to make this story fit seemlessly into the movies and give it so much background info. Great job!

Please!!!!! For anything come back and update I'm begging you please!!!!!!

Wow, those were some hot-as-heck love scenes you've crafted. You've really got Riddick's voice there. Really super!

Thank you for not entirely abandoning this story. Still, I feel that I have to say this: I'm not trying to be cruel or unfair, but I don't understand why the new chapters are taking so long to put up. I remember that you mentioned something about losing the story or such... but this is written so close to the original that I think you found a copy somewhere. Now, you're at the same point as you were before... where's the new stuff? I realize that there are new readers out there, but I (as an older fan) am disappointed when I realize that you've updated with old material. Please continue the story!

This story is totally amazing. I use to be a fan fic junkie for a few years under another ship. But i just lost my passion for reading ANYTHING at all. This story has offically brought me back. I would love to see more of this story very soon. Your descriptions and character details as so precise. I loved the scene where they both marked each other. It was very reminesent of Underworld with the entire blood memory thing. However, when you wrote it, the scenes where so much more visual than anything I've seen in any movie. Thank you for igniting my passion for fan fic again. Please write more soon.