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for Hopes, Dreams and Realisations

by Pilgrim

person Stipje
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bootstrap... Has she met him
before? (Can't remember, sorry =p)

It looks like she's given up and
decided to just go back to her old life.
But what about her wanting to trick Jones
as well?

person Stipje
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A cliffhanger?
I don't like cliffhangers!
(Unless you're planning on
updating soon after =p)

Gotta love Tia... She's
going to help Jack, right?

Just get them back together!
(But not too soon...)
person Stipje
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Geez I'm really repeating myself here...
*rolls eyes in annoyance*
person Stipje
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jack's probably too far gone to even
notice she didn't tell him she loves
him back...

Plot twist? I love plot twists! =p
How much time does she have left, before
Davey comes to get her?
person Stipje
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You bet!

She can't do that, she has to fight!
Jack'll go and rescue her, once he has the
heart, right?
I sooo want them to be together...
But not too soon! I love your hoppin'
plotbunnies =D
person stipje
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I came back for more!

Have been catching up on the last chapter of Twisted Views
and this first one.
So, what does really matter to her? Jack?
person Michelle
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1--I loved the way Oria was annoyed by Mr. Gibbs singing the Yo Ho song. I could just picture a drunken Gibbs singing that song over and over and Oria getting sick of hearing it. It made me laugh. The ending was also quite interesting....Jacks question. What does Davey have over her? It's not her soul, but what. Nice cliffhanger
person Michelle
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2--Of course I'm back. I love this series. This chapter was very good. We found out the reason Oria is bound to Davey, her mortality. Now that Jack knows what is keeping Oria involved with D. Jones, I'm sure he will find a way to get what he wants. I also wonder what Oria so desperately wants but cannot have until she is mortal again. I have an idea, but time will tell if I am right. And last but not least, I loved the way Jack was so persistant with Oria and cuts her hammock to get her to sleep in his bed. I knew Oria couldn't resist him. Like she said, deal with the consiquences later.