rate_review Reviews

*blinks* I haven't read your reviews yet, but in your responses I remember reading something about someone's brains flopping out of their heads...Well, I came completely appart, melted into a puddle if you will. ^.^ Luckily my water heater is broken, so we have a rather large supply of cold water, but I admit to having to take a break between CH 13 and 14, to er...*blushes* jumpmy hubby. He thanks you by the way. ^.^ I felt as though I were watching this as a movie. Honestly. And someone once paid me the same compliment, and I was on cloud 11 for about a week. The imagry you create, is beautiful. You are funny. I sprayed soda on my screen twice. Completely unprepared for what I read both times. "You will always remember this day as the day you almost fucked Captain Jack Sparrow." And this one...*giggles* *high pitched cockney* "Oh Jack, drag yer nuts over me guts..." Both times my hubby looked at me as though I were insane. I can't blame him though....LOL. I loved the "primordial enchantment" line, that was beautiful. I loved the bed he set up for her, that was always a fantasy of mine...a huge bed on the beach, breeze, white linen curtains, and the water lapping about the posts. Oh and who wouldn't love to have a gold replica of Jack's cock? I know I would. *grins* I love the way you write Jack...in love, sweet, but not too terribly mushy, always in character, always witty. *sigh* This was a masterpiece, and handsdown...no lie...the best Jack/Lizzie action I have ever read. Although I have to admit, I am not too fond of her. Who would honestly choose Will over Jack? I rather though Will looked a bit like a greasy rat, complete with greasy rat mustache, and Jack was more muscular, more manly...more everything than Will. The only time I found him attractive in the movies, was when he captained the Flying Dutchman. Maybe it was the black clothes, and his hair being tied back? I dunno. Anywho..that reminds me of a hilarious parody fic I read. I have no idea where I found it, maybe you have already read it? Jack and Elizabeth were aboard the Pearl, and were locked in a heated embrace, and suddenly, the Dutchman popped up out of the water, next to the Pearl, nearly knocking over Jack and 'Lizbeth. She ran over to the side of the ship, and Will ran up to her, and shouted, "Eight years!!" Lizzie- "I'm counting the days!!" *passionate kiss, tearful goodbyes* *Dutchman disappears* Jack looks mournful, and Lizzie apologizes. Jack says something like, "It's alright, even though you are the only woman for me, I understand that I'm not the only man for you." *Apologetic and passionate kissing* *The Dutchman pops up once more, this time knocking Lizzie and Jack over* Jack this time, runs over to where Will is standing. They share a heated kiss. Jack- "Eight years!" Will- I'm counting the days!" *smiling and waving ensues, before Will disappears once more below the depths of the ocean* Lizzie runs off to Jack's cabin, where she throws Jack's pillow at him, knocking him over then slamming the door shut.LOL Oh man. That was a funny, funny story. Anywho, I think I've read all your stuff. I haven't seen The Procphecy, so I doubt it would make much sense to me. XXOO

Wow, this is a really awesome story! I love it, can't wait for more!

JackSparrowsWench

Oh! Please update soon! I love this story, I really do! Please please please update soon! Don't give up on this story, it's too good!

I love the chemistry between Jack and Elizabeth! Thank you for writing!

Wisend Wonders

One of the best Jack/Elizabeth stories I've read. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

It's been months since your story was updated...I want to know what happens next!! I love your story and want the rest of it. :0(

When will you update this story? I really like it and I hope you post another chapter soon. Do you have any other sites with your stories?

okies i am caught up with this one and i love it....keep it up mate.

Hey :)

I just wanted to say that this is a fantastic piece of work!

I found this by accident, but now i'm absolutely hooked, i even had to join this place just so i could review and tell you so. I can't wait for the next chapter, i found myself laughing out loud to all Jack's quirky remarks. I.E "almost fucked Captain Jack Sparrow." i found myself in tears of laughter, seriously though you portray him very well and its absolutely amazing and such a great read.

You really have Elizabeth set to a 'T'she comes across just as i imagine her to, you'veinspired me to try and write a peice but i doubt i will i could never write like this, its brilliant well done!

I absolutely love this fic i hope you update soon i really cant wait :D

Cat xx

*DIES!*
And that's all I have to say!

opwieurhjwkfhweilu!!!!!!!
Each time I tell myself that it CAN'T be better than the last chapter. But you surprised me once again.
Best fucking fellatio scene I ever read (déjà vu... :P)!!! More on Tasty Pirates.