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for In The Nick Of Time

by LaurenGraceJurious

person rejerito
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely wedding! And funny too! XD
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears from her eyes* Im all sentimental now....that doesnt however change the fact that its almost wedding night time!!!
person heartJD
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But we have our own J/E board! (I don't know if I can post a link here..)

http://z8.invisionfree.com/Tasty_Pirates

We talked a lot about your fic there ;)
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... okay, my girliness has to show now. That was such a beautiful wedding, so in character, and I love how they didn't wait to kiss. Lovely, lovely, lovely!!!
And this is new, a bed on a beach. I hope they keep those curtains tied tightly, or people will be seeing the Captain and his lady!!

*sits back*

Well, get to the wedding night!!
person heartJD
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now a real review:
so beautiful! their vows were perfect.

And wow, wedding night on a desert island! who wouldn't want that!
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Their first night together as man and wife, their first full and complete physical union, was to take place in a bed that sat both upon land and sea, where one became the other."

*sigh*
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, a wedding! I LOVE weddings! Drinks all around!

This chapter made me smile. I can't wait for the wedding NIGHT, though! ;)
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WEDDING NIGHT! WEDDING NIGHT!
I wants it now...
No, seriously, that was so sweet. And Jack... sigh. I might try to fanart it... let's see if I can do a decent Jack!
person heartJD
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved how Gibbs plays the father figure... The whole thing was really in-character: the nervousness even if you know you're doing the right thing..
A simple wedding, but they're the best ones anyway, IMO. ;)

I'll go read your Sleepy Hollow fic, now!
person rejerito
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Get married already! *jumps in anticipation*