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for In The Nick Of Time

by LaurenGraceJurious

person rejerito
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Has somebody seen my brain?
I thought I lost it somewhere around here...
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rejerito your brain might be somewhere with mine. I dont think im going to live through the wedding night. Im predicting that right now. Im going to open windows... i can use some 5 degree air right about now.
person rejerito
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo HOT!!!! I think I need a cold shower now!
"This was a wonderful educational opportunity!" XD This line made me laugh!
person heartJD
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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YOU ROCK!! And that last line.. LOL!

Anyway, it was so hot... Now where's my man?
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigod, yep, still alive here. Barely, but I'm still kickin'. I can't die until they get it on, at least. lol This most recent chapter... ohmigod that was crazy. I think that's the first time I've ever seen a thigh-crease fuck in a J/E story... and you did it so well! Oh, to be that thigh... *sigh* Please update soon! Like, quit your job, drop out of school, stop doing whatever it is you do... and write this story for us. That's it. I'll buy you a chocolate sundae. *wink*
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... I can't wait until the actual wedding night!!! Write it, soon!!!!!!
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*thud*
person heartJD
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. man.

need a cold shower NOW.

fucking best fellatio scene I ever read.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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*Sorry, but DP's brain blacked out after reading an incredible chapter. She will be back momentarily.*
person Ziva
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot!!! I always thought Lizzie was a quick learner. *grins*