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for In The Nick Of Time

by LaurenGraceJurious

schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How exactly am i supposed to comment on that?? I mean seriously I cant even so much as think straight right now.
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. For the love of Sparrabeth smut, and nothing even HAPPENED yet!!
person Ziva
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jack is going to wait, because he doesn't want tu hurt Elisabeth, although he has wanted her for so long. How sweet!
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. That was hot. Can't wait until they actually DO something. *wiping brow* It better be soon! :)
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, wait- if she was married and not a virgin, he would have taken her?
But since she is unmarried and a virgin, he won't? Is he waiting until they marry? I don't understand.
But this is great! Keep going!
person heartJD
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did it. You actually stopped right there. You're crueeeeeel!!
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
His WIFE? Ohhh, what a pleasant, unexpected turn of events! Oh, and I absolutely LOVED the Pearl rolling! That was amazing! I could see them pulling something like off in the movie. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep 'em coming, you!
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I hate this work-in-progress, posting-one-chapter-at-a-time business. It's driving me up the wall to have to wait! haha
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This an incredible story! It is so eloquently written, completely exciting, and steamy! Please, I beg of you...post more chapters!
person rejerito
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! Please!