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for In The Nick Of Time

by LaurenGraceJurious

person Ziva
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes,Lizzie has finally found Jack! And he saved her. I loved that scene. And I loved their game. I'm looking forward for the next chapter. *grins wickedly*
Your story is great!!!
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even i was afraid of that wave!!! Tingles i have tingles!!
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! He proposed!
person Ziva
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're mean! Poor Lizzie and Jack, now that they are finally together this storm has to come.
But you made it up to me by letting Jack propose to Elisabeth!
person heartJD
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! Loved it. Loved how they were holding hands...

Smut in the next chapter, right?

And why does everybody think of "Francis" as the real name for Jack?
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Update soon!!!
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WORD!

I'm all about Jack busting my brig.

Oh. Wait. Yes. Well, get with it. Come on. We need more story. :p
person rejerito
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Captain Jack Sparrow has a strength that could match Zeus' son Hercules himself!
Belive me I've seen it with me own eyes!!
Great one! Update soon please!
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So doing the dance of joy over here! And Francis!! HAHA i love it!!
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG.

You left me HANGING. Hanging!

Please hurry up and update. I'm really enjoying this story. I signed up just to scream at you for making me wait. LOL