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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
talk about beginning with a BANG! Great story, love the cliffhanger chapter ends (well, I hate them cuz they're frustrating but I love them too ya know?) This is a wonderful story, looking forward to more, like YESTERDAY!
ps: on the boards, I am vexesALLmen...I see a few names I recognize in your reviews so I thought I'd identify myself.
ps: on the boards, I am vexesALLmen...I see a few names I recognize in your reviews so I thought I'd identify myself.
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. A love-sick Jack, how sweet. I'm really curious how he will react when he finds her in the brick.
But I think Lizzie should have spoken to Will or at least leave him and her father a letter. They must be very worried.
But I think Lizzie should have spoken to Will or at least leave him and her father a letter. They must be very worried.
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!!!!! How could you stop now???
Update! Update! Updateeee!!!!!!!!!
Update! Update! Updateeee!!!!!!!!!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*skips and frolicks happily* YEY!!! Still craving more tho i will admit. Anyhow you have managed to inspire me to go work on a oneshot i started last night on account of i couldn't sleep once the silly idea crept into my head.
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry if I didn't review before, I had to create an account.
But WOW! This last chapter was intense! Can't wait fort the next :D
But WOW! This last chapter was intense! Can't wait fort the next :D
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Jack is strong. Hey, at least they are together again! Can't wait for more, update soon!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigod, I want Jack to bust me out of the brig! I can actually see him in my head, breaking down the bars with only his hands... and it's sooo sexy. Thanks so much for that image. *sigh*
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I came across this story! You write very well and capture the voices of these characters wonderfully. I can't wait to see the next installment from you!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How dare you. To leave off at a cliffhanger! Ugh! I can't wait to read their reactions when they see each other. Update soon, or there will be no cookies for you!!!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOO HOOO!!!!! Hes gonna find Lizzie!! *claps hands* Im just slightly hyper right now can you tell? Love it, this story just keeps getting better.