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for A Good Man

by Ladykohl

person avari20
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love for you to continue this. A very intriguing opening!
person kerri acheson
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...wheres the rest of the story!? i NEED to read it!*withdrawl symptoms* I left a comment on your other lovly story as well, but thought I would leave another here.
I love the way you portray Jack in this, and bits of your other, story. He is totally in character...yet he has this dominence that he doesnt seem to have in the movies...I love it. Maybe its just me and my secret passion for guys who are aggresive but...its really great! PLEASE let me know when/if the next chapter will be out...I will absolutly swoon when/if it does! Keep Jacks aggressivness and everything will be fine! Wonderful story so far...you really know how to keep a readers attention!
~Kerri
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm so glad to see more fic from you! I look forward to the next chapter!
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Continue!
person rejerito
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm so happy you're writting another story!
And this first chapter is just great!
I hope you can update soon! I want to know how this continues!
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your writing this past weekend and, subsequently, read 'When the Rum Runs Out' all in one sitting! I must say I am very pleased to have found an author who captures the voices of these characters so incredibly well. I always feel like I'm watching the movie when I'm reading your work. I can't wait to see more on this, or that WtRRO sequel you mentioned! That would definitely be interesting and very welcomed!
person DesiringPirates
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. That is lovely, I can't wait to read more! Why does your stuff give me thrills and make me cry? Heehee I guess it's because you are a good writer.