schedule
March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your language on this one. Will's curses were quite amusing (sweet superman's underwear *snickers*).
Even though I see Will more as the submissive counterpart, you do make Will being on top believable enough. I like the contrast between Will's confidence of control and his cute curses. And the way they both were blushing virgins...*laughs* Priceless. Very well played.
And when Warren said "how don't you just let go on this part" was also very golden.
I like this fic very much. It's a gem ^-^
Even though I see Will more as the submissive counterpart, you do make Will being on top believable enough. I like the contrast between Will's confidence of control and his cute curses. And the way they both were blushing virgins...*laughs* Priceless. Very well played.
And when Warren said "how don't you just let go on this part" was also very golden.
I like this fic very much. It's a gem ^-^
schedule
February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rrrawr! The cute awkwardness between the two when trying something new is really sweet. The idea about Will doing Zach as an experiment back in the day kinda shows Will's odd vulnerability when he reveals it to Warren. And I really liked the very tender moment between the two when they were both discovering what they liked about the new situation.
schedule
January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Warren should always be on top:P