errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love your story. Jack and Elizabeth are portrayed really well. Please finish it!
schedule
April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update this story?
PLEASE???
I'm dying to know what happens next!
PLEASE???
I'm dying to know what happens next!
schedule
February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story and a really interesting twist to it. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule
February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story a lot. I can't wait for an update.
schedule
February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snif!* Poor Lizzie...*snif!* Let me give you a big hug! *hugs*
schedule
January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter! Next chapter! PLEASE!!!
schedule
January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I was right, Elisabeth is the Thak Mahara. That's going to become interesting. I'm wondering if her father knows what she is and if he even is her biological father.
schedule
January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Lizzie. I want to give her a hug!
schedule
January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Liz possibly being the treasure is interesting on so many levels. Indeed almost calling back to what was said in cotbp. Anyway, a lovely twist. And, the scene where Jack is looking into Liz's eyes in the "compromising position"...very nice. ;D Update more, I love the storyline!
schedule
January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really interested what Jacks friend has to tell them. And I want to know even more what is so special about her. Something or someone seems to be protecting her.