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for Arabian Knights

by TMaria

person TMaria
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks once again for the reviews!! :-D

things are about to become VERRRRRRRRRRRY interesting now :-D , i promise you!! :D

be a while until you get any smutty action though...i like to take my time :-D

(Although I may add in some tense sexual moments and possibly some dreams to tide you along ;-D hehehehe!)

thanks for reviewing, i really appreciate it!!! :-D

Shelly xx
person rejerito
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This keeps getting better and better!
person heartJD
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! more, more! ;)

I'm sure Lizzie will find him sexy. :D
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! "Are you calling me fat?!" LOL this was the greatest chapter ever!
person TMaria
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks guys :)

I really appreciate the comments!!!! :-D


I am working on chapter 9 at the moment, and i plan on loading between 1-2 chapters a night....


Ziva, I think you are confused by the Captain that sold Elizabeth to Arafat...but dont worry, it will become clear in chapter 3 that it wasn't Will who actually sold Elizabeth :-D hehe!!

I hope you continue to enjoy this series, as i am really enjoying writing it!!!!

thanks alot!!!

keep reading and sending me your thoughts...it keeps me going hehe!!

xx
person rejerito
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This sounds very good! XD
Can't wait for next chapter!
person Ziva
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will died in their wedding night? Poor Elisabeth. How can Jack even think about leaving her there? It won't be easy to convince Arafat to let her go. But Jack wouldn't be Captain Jack Sparrow if he didn't find a solution for this problem.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! This is really interesting...
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im really intrigued by this! Please continue soon!
person Ziva
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting. I'm curious how Jack will manage to free Elisabeth. I love the way you describe Jack and Elisabeth. They are absolutely in character. But where is Will? I can't imagine him selling Elisabeth and then just leaving. Is he still somewhere near?
And I'm so curious what the 'T'hak Mahara' is. Could it be Elisabeth?