rate_review Reviews

Viv, I registered only to submit a review. I loved your story, not only it was very very hot, but also wonderfully written. I love how you write the characters and their relationship. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

Wow! (catches breath) What an incredible one-shot. This is astonishingly well-written and insightful. It's not just a fuck scene by any means, it's a mini character study of both Jackson and Lisa. And so superbly brought to life. Which among us ladies would not love to hear Jackson Rippner beg for his own orgasm? My. God.

"His mind clouded over again, what had been ringingly clear a moment ago became muted, ephemeral and he found he did want it, wanted her - for the briefest moment – on her terms – and he whispered it like magic against her knee, “Please, Leese…please.”"

All that, and done without making him any less Jacksonian. I am bowled over by your style and desperately hope you will have more additions soon - you're the only game in town, as far as I'm concerned!