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for The Bet

by unknownsoldier

schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great! I love reading you, I get to disappear into this little world of Jack Elizabeth for a while where they exist like it's another movie...the one we'd all like to see! "Why was he so bloody stupid sometimes?"--lol I think that was my favorite line in the whole story, I mean, how many of us have thought that about the men our lives a time or two?lol Fabulous! Keep writing!
person rejerito
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snif* That was beautiful! *snif*