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for Tempting Fate

by Maven

schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story, keep it up
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens with Jareth and Sarah!
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this reminds me of the story of the husband and wife who want to give the other a special gift. the husband wants to buy his wife a fancy expensive comb for her beautiful long hair so he sells his pocket watch to buy it. the wife wants to buy a fob for her husband's watch so she sells her hair to a wig maker to buy the fob.

real love is selfless and self sacrificing.

a pleasure,
ginny
person Gaki
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa~~~~~......*pours a bucket of icy cold water over head* steamy...... I wonder what's going to happen in the morning. Update soon!
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wanted to give you an appropriate reward and these are really really good... like your story! rich chocolatey goodness!

::Guinness Brownies::

4 eggs
3/4 cup sugar
9 oz. dark chocolate
5 oz. white chocolate
8 tbsp unsalted butter (1 stick)
3/4 c flour
3/4 c cocoa
1 1/4 c Guinness Stout
Powdered sugar (confectioner's sugar)

Preheat the oven to 375° F and butter an 8 inch square cake pan.

Place butter and chocolate (broken into pieces or chopped) in a saucepan over a low heat to melt. While the chocolate is melting, beat together the eggs and sugar in a large bowl until light and fluffy. When the chocolate is melted, pour into the bowl and mix well. In a small bowl, sift together flour and cocoa. Add slowly to the large bowl and mix well. Last, whisk in the Guinness.

Pour batter into cake pan and bake for 25-35 minutes, or until a knife inserted into the center comes out almost clean. Remove from oven and allow to cool. Sprinkle with powdered sugar on top and cut into squares to serve.

a pleasure,
ginny
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I didn't think you could beat the last one but this one has potential. Keep writing I'm hooked!
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story..please keep it up
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he had to slide over to the passanger seat underneath sarah without being goosed by the gear shift!? with those long legs?

... i had something really relevant, complimentary and witty to say but stuff just went too crazy here and now i don't remember what i was going to say... just pretend this was the best review ever and smile... sorry =(

sincerely,
ginny

schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
personally i couldn't care less about about the smut, i like the story and the interaction between the characters. i am enjoying this and i am looking forward to reading more.

thank you,
ginny
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, are you going to write more? I hope so!!