rate_review Reviews

OHG! DP, this was pretty intense! One of the things that I think I like so much about fanfiction is that the good writers always get Jack's character to a "T" but in doing so are also able to creat different distinctions of him from everyone else's Jack. For instance, your Jack is most definitely Jack, but he's more the 'whips, chains and studded leather' variety!lol Great! I thought for sure we were headed for a "dungeon" scene there too!lol Keep it coming...or cumming...whichever you prefer!;-)

LOVED IT!!!!! :-D
You had me on the edge of my seat there!!!!!