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by LadyOfTheSilent

schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice sexual scene again, and nice tender moments between them. Reading the first part reminded me again that I was curious as to why he doesn't want to take off the scarf, but I suppose it's something more mental than physical, that it's an important part of the legendary Captain Jack Sparrow, and without it he might feel like the naive boy that ran away from his father's house. That's just my guess ^_^"
person Moomus78
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How lovely! I liked this little tale very much. It was just enough smut to get your engine going, and just enough romanticness, or as much as Jack would allow, to make you sigh.
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing excerpt of your main story! Your writing is so easy to get into, and when I read you, I can see it all happening like it's another movie! Wonderful job!