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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"The hole at the end was larger than a human male’s – the species pissed and climaxed in quantity."
Finding underappreciated lines is always great. This line is perfect, simply because it's so raunchy. It effortlessly conjures up the mental image of an alien beast absolutely degrading a human female with the sheer volume of his load. The use of the word "piss" instead of "urinate" or something similar is a subtle touch that gets across a sensibility I love but can't really articulate very well in words. I'll try anyway. It says to the reader "Here's what you want to know about this organ. You want to know that this thing can really drench a slut. You want to understand the virility of the cock that's going to be pushing the action forward. Just admit it."
This one line added a lot to the whole story for me. It made me feel like those girls were about to get truly defiled by something more powerful and virile than they could ever handle and hope to retain any dignity.
Thumbs up!
Finding underappreciated lines is always great. This line is perfect, simply because it's so raunchy. It effortlessly conjures up the mental image of an alien beast absolutely degrading a human female with the sheer volume of his load. The use of the word "piss" instead of "urinate" or something similar is a subtle touch that gets across a sensibility I love but can't really articulate very well in words. I'll try anyway. It says to the reader "Here's what you want to know about this organ. You want to know that this thing can really drench a slut. You want to understand the virility of the cock that's going to be pushing the action forward. Just admit it."
This one line added a lot to the whole story for me. It made me feel like those girls were about to get truly defiled by something more powerful and virile than they could ever handle and hope to retain any dignity.
Thumbs up!
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome to the core!