rate_review Reviews

I had to read yours after seeing your signature on the Forums.

This was quite interesting.  Quite descriptive, intense, and well written.  The pace was exactly as needed throughout and the details...  They were shiver inducing and excellent; I could picture everything (well, I strayed away from the eyes; personal history and eyes, don't do well), but definitely glad I read it.

Very intens and good writen.
Thought not my favored style of story i still have to admit it was a pleasure to read.

Wow. I've read a couple of your fics before and I liked them, so I thought I had a good idea of the freaky stuff you'd write.

I was wrong.

I'm honestly not entirely sure how I feel about this one, except to say it was very well written. Never before have I had such ambivalence about a fic.

I do hope you keep writing though.
I think...

Oh my god. You really did, you flayed her. I mean, flayed her. I told you those flames only made me want to read your stories! (It's Tuftiperkys from the Forum). I don't even read this genre but wow, I mean, wow! Bloody fantastic writing, it made my skin crawl. I was begging for her death towards the end, anything to make it stop. I love horror and torture fics but I have never read anything like this. Beautifully horrid! Ugh, I can't get over it. There's no way I'll be able to work up the nerve to read another one of yours for awhile, but I know where to go when I want terror and violence, eh?

"Jaina’s skin was flayed from head to ankles and tugged loose as her flight suit had been; it fell in great bloody sheets and small scraps to the metal corridor"

Shiver-inducing, elegant, and horrifyingly realistic. I have never reacted so strongly to a fanfic! Don't ever, ever, ever let a flame stop you from writing as it is utterly unique, one of a kind, a rare gem. It's their own fault for not reading your warnings, which are displayed more than once. God, I feel like I need a shower after reading that, my jaw just dropped. On a side note, the intestines bit reminded me of Chuck Palahniuk's book, 'Haunted.' It's not as hardcore as this but I'd recommend it to you nonetheless. Lovely, terrifyingly lovely. Please continue writing!

very disturbing. i loved it.

oh, i forgot...please contact me sometime, i'd love to discuss some torture ideas for my hellraiser fics :)

some sick shit, 5stars... I liked it, even though I cannot understand how someone could have such a sick n' twisted idea?... Did you feel even a tiny bit gross when writing this??

Great story, liked the premise and the torture.

All I can say is that was one Twi'lek that deserved death for dishing out the revenge it gave. Ew, Ew, EEW. Poor Jaina.