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for Devil & the Deep Dark Ocean

by MuseofScrolls

person Keen
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imagine how happy I was to come back and see three more chapters added to this. I love the idea of Kira as a guardian with all her different forms and powers. It’s always good to see a female kick butt. Thank the bunnies for me.
-Cam
person JulieL
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know they are annoying, but you should never knock the plot bunny. This actually comes from someone who is having trouble with plot bunnies herself.

This is really good and am enjoying every minute of it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot! [plays with the bunnies] I LOVE THIS STORY BECAUSE IT IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!! ....o.O Anyway, it's a lot more fast paced than your other stories. (well, the amazon one seemed like it had a lot more backstory to it before you got to the juicy action. that is what I mean ...) So yay for juicy action! It flows very well too, and feels cohesive (that's a fun word...) and I think Ro'nan is spiffy. And your heroine is already in mortal peril!! It's too perilous!! Sorry, I'm jumping fandoms now... In any case, ALL THE WANKERS SHOULD REVIEW!!! o.O Don't mind me..... I'm going to leave and be strange elsewhere now... KEEP WRITING! FEED THE BUNNIES!!!
=]
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good plot Bunny!!! I like it very much because it has sory of a fantasy feel to it. I will be on the look out for more
person Keen
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well by damn, what an opener. Good deal.