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Loved it, that was a great little rendezvous between Jack and Elizabeth! Hope you decide to continue it or write more of them!

JackSparrowsWench

Hey, I thought I'd thank you for your lovely comments on my piece and come to see yours! I really enjoyed several things about it, namely Jack's talking to himself and both of their trepidations. Your descriptions of the scene, body, facial expressions, etc. were also very nice. I think Jack should speak "eloquently", as you said - if you look at his movie dialogue he tends to use a lot of big words. For your first time writing smut, not half bad at all! I did wonder where Elizabeth would come by lacy robe on a pirate ship, though. the "visual aid" also appreciated. Nice!

to where their bodies were so magnificently joined

I love that. Good writing.

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! EXCELLENT! AND WHOA! I am glad to have finally read a story where Jack is taking a bath and Elizabeth stumbles in on him! PLEASE continue! You should write something dramatic and write more love scenes! This was...whoa!

I love the start. My only request: longer chapters!

Wow! What an excellent beginning! I'd love to read more. All the way through this ahpter I had the feeling that I'm into the story and quietly watching the events - love it!
More please :o)
~Saskia~

Oh, wow! This is really HOT! Jack in a bath-tub ... I guess you drew some inspiration from "From Hell" here. I've always ADORED that scene, and I think it's a shame Jack won't be in the bath-house scene in AWE! But anyway, that's what fanfiction is for! Great story so far, can't wait to read more!

great so far! and it does end with her gwaking....argghh!! try and post it again!!! or maybe post the rest as another chapter!! loving it so far!!