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that was great

Wow! This is so terrific - whenever I need a pick me up I trot over here and read this amazing missing chapter. It is so well-written and so Jackson Rippner. WOW! I have so many favorite parts - the way you write him in the car and him arriving home, stripping his clothes off, him in the shower...and getting to be privy to his fantasy and how *that* changes for him through the course of his experience here - gahhhhhhhhhh.

Additionally, one of my favorite quotes is "Jackson’s knuckles ground against the tile, pressed against the shower wall as he thrust his cock into his fist with slow, measured movements, in a half-conscious simulation of his vivid fantasy. He drew in an extensive, deep breath; lightning shooting down his spine and clenching every muscle in taut intensity. He came, groaning and gasping loudly above the hiss of the shower.." - good GOD, yes.

Thank you for writing this and please PLEASE write more! WOO-HOOOOOOOO!

fuckin' sweet dude. You're an awesome writer, really descriptive. . . . sexy.

Hey!! Okay so I just finished reading your fic 'crossing the line' and it was amazing. I actually felt like the way you continued the story was plausible and I felt like it was something that could have happened with the storyline. In fact, I kind of liked your version much better. The ending of red eye kind of seemed anti-climatic because there's so much sexual tension between Jackson and Lisa and then suddenly its over. It doesn't explore that side of their relationship along with what's going on. I love how you made both aspects come together. I also loved how you showed Jackson following Lisa before the plane. He slowly gets drawn in by her and she becomes an obsession for him. This is probably the best Red Eye fic I've read so far. Congrats for a great plot and characters full of depth!!! Hopefully you're still writing! Lol, at this point, I'll read anything you want to write!

~Sonya

Woo! lol, loved it! But question: Where is Crossing the Line??? It's not posted here. Can you tell me where it is? I'd love to read it!

~Sonya

Hi!

Crossing the Line is over at ff.net- right here-

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2993273/1/

There are 31 chapters, lol, just to warn you. But if you read and enjoy it, please do leave me a review. And thank you so much for leaving one here- very few readers here do so. ;)

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:fans herself:

I lack words, Pisc... I'm virtually trembling... :grins: Like he did... after, I guess...

Well... :clears throat: well written, good... ehm, imagery... :grins again: What would we do without our favorite villains in compromising situations???

:off to find husband:

(Great distraction, Pisc, see you! :wink:)

Nic.