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for ManEater

by tinamonic

person ads
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update, im going mad, please!!
person Fanikol
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update
person Haley
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear..i really hope this carmen bird doesnt get in the way of jack and lizzie...because if she does ill have to add another victim to my already long list...please please please update soon!!
person Trish
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When Are You Going To Update...I Cant Wait!! I Love Ur Story!!!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwh stupid Jack :/ Though I suppose it helped us know his feelings for Lizzie. I dont know if I caught on to what you were hinting at but I liked that whatever Carmen did, he thought back to Lizzie and compared them. Never a good sign and if it were anybody else besides Carmen Im sure Jack would have received a slap ;) Now, is Lizzie going to find out about this? If so, Jack and here will never get back together I wouldnt think (*jumps off a cliff*) or will she never know? But secrets like that have a nasty way of creeping up on you...I thought Jack was going to stop halfway through to be honest. Hmmm will we find out Lizzie answer to Wills question? Its obvious they still love each other. But are they both ready to admit it and forgive and forget? They're so stubborn!
Cant wait for the update, I think this story to pieces. Please dont leave me hanging on long!
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person sophia
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was just wondering, when is this story going to take a good turn? i mean its great right now dont read me wrong but chapter after chapter im getting a little depressed cause i want jack and lizzie together. good job so far =)
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it...very great!! cant wait to read more, but i might be stupid or something that Jack was thinking about Lizze the whole time he was shagging Carmen?...and that he is in love,...lol idk, but i love it, cant wait to read more :D
person freelke
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I loved the bonus chapter. I hope the next chapter is up VERY soon. I love reading your wonderful story
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I love this, right? And that it's pretty much one of my favorite Sparrabeth fics? But
you need to update really soon. For my sanity. Savvy?? lol
person freelke
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it so much. Thanks you for taking the time to write so much. I love your work, you're a great writer. I can't wait for the next chapter!