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No! Jack dont do it! Why do I get the feeling if this happens Lizzie will find out, and never want him back? 2 wrongs dont make a right, you hear me Jack Sparrow!?!?!? I cant believe I nearly missed this update, I've been waiting so long for it, and you still havnt told us Lizzie's answer!!! I only have one request: that they end up together in the end, please? *smiles sweetly*
I adore your story, update soon! Cant wait to see Jacks important decision, I just hope he makes the right one!
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ohh damn thoes cliff hangers, lol....but yea love the story cant wait to read more...love it!! :D

you haven't updated in a while :(

Beatyful story

Wating for next chapter

i was sooo happy when i saw that this chappy was posted!! she better say that yes she does love jack..cuz she does...she has 2...will is a eunuch...i think i will go kill elizabeth and jack now for not being able to sort out this mess....well i huess we will have to wait and see how exactly they will manage to get around this whole fiasco..update soon plzzzzzzz

omg....DAMN THOSE CLIFF HANGERSSSS!! lol but i love the story, and i cant wait to read more, u must update soonnnn! asap! lol

Yes !!! I love your story I hope you'll updated it soon !!! Please !!

thank you for the new chapter. loved it! I can't wait for the next one. I hope Jack makes an appearance. SUch a great story

wow! I just wrote a huge review for this and it didnt send, Im pissed off lol! Now to remember what I wrote...
Amazing chapter, I liked it but I have to say one thing: WILL FORGAVE LIZZIE!? Nooooo!! Why do I get the feeling Lizzie is going to choose Will now, because she thinks Jack hated her and just used her. Or maybe she'll end up using them both again, I hope not =[ I hope Lizzie and Jack can sort everything out, they have to! And Will asking if she loved Jack! Ofcourse she does, I hope she doesnt lie. They've had enough lies and deceit to last a lifetime.
About Jack, we didnt see him =O I wonder if anything happened between him and Carmen? How does he feel? Does he still love Lizzi? Did he mean everything he said? I'd love to see a chapter with just him and Lizzie sorting things out. They're perfect together, they cant just go their seperate ways! They can work it out. I hope so anyway...
I'd love Will and Jack to still be friends but I dont think thats all too possible anymore, maybe Will could have Carmen. I feel sorry for him but its obvious Lizzie's heart is with Jack

Amazingly awesome chapter, brilliant story. You've got me hanging on your every word! Hope your laptop problems are sorted soon, I cant wait for the next chapter.
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P.s - I'm gonna and copy and paste this just incase it doesnt work again :P

yay for updating!
it's good that this is finally brought up between liz and willlll