rate_review Reviews

okay...so.....the tension is still there..
and it needs to go away. hehehe.
somehow they need to stay in character
but make up...
hmmm..
good luck with that.

You know? I've had quite a bad day and I have a screwy mouse but I came and saw this and I felt amazing. I truly love your fanficts, the emotions and tension is all there I cant wait for an update. But surely its about time Jack and Lizzie made up? :[ Are they ever going to be able to forgive each other for their words and actions? Why do I get the feeling youre going to break my heart and end it on a sad note? PLEASE DONT! And dont let it be done yet, your fanfict keeps me going through rough times lol. They have to make up, they have to! But I just cant see how, unless Jack decides to go after Lizzie, but it doesnt seem that way... I beg you to let them sort things out and get back on track with things, they love each other so much!!!
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I just have to say; they're both in the wrong. Firstly none of this would have ever happened if Lizzie had been straight with Will and finished him instead of having them both. However Jacks words were mean and hurtful and even though he probably didnt mean them (he was really just hurt) he needs to apologize too. They both do! And Will can have Carmen :] I'll die (Dramatic much? :P) if our favourite couple doesnt get up together.

oh my god...if jack and eilzabeth dont reconcile i think i will need to shoot something....ill shoot my stufed animal...*goes in search of stuffed animal*

I like the edgier version too! Please write another chapter soon. I love this story, it keeps getting better and better. I hope Guilt eventually gets the better of Jack and he realizes the mistake he's made. I hope he and lizzie get back together in one way or another :)

I wanted to review again. I can't wait until the next chater is up. I loved this one.

And, now...Im crying! Again. Been ill all day actually so was good to come on here and read such a great chapter. Im heartbroken though, truly heartbroken. Obviously Jack didnt mean he just wanted her for sex, right, RIGHT!? Sorry going abit crazy, you cant leave me hanging like this really, hurry up and post again and please PROMISE ME they'll get back together? They have to! ='[[[
Great chapter
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P.S - Can I email you reviews? I dont see the option if there is one lol and I think I would prefer to email you my thanks :P
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And now I cant stop squealing. I love love love your story. Why do they both have to hurt each other so much? Though if you can promise me it will all work out in the end? *does puppy dog eyes* It's obvious they both love each other, they HAVE to end up together again. But Jack said he never planned on staying with her again, she had betrayed him up to the point of no forgiveness? Im scared. What about Carmen? Maybe her and Will...awwh your story is amazing. Please update soon, but let them be back together =[[[ I hate them hurting each other like this, they love each other you hear me!? Sparrabeth forever!
Amazing story, amazing chapter (though short but i can understand why. Ive been on tether hooks waiting for your update) How long till the next chapter? Never stop this story :P
LOVED IT!!!!!
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I'm still upset, but I have to say well wirtten!!!
Plz go on very soon. I really want to see Jack und Liz together again!
This paring roxx^^
Thx for this Jacks_peapod