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you should definitely update soon!
it's really good. but I hate when people are in fights!
even just for pretend.
it makes the story more interesting, but I wish one of them would just admit that they can't take it any more.
I can't.
:(

hey i love it , hell i love the whole story, u really gotta keep writing this, i LOVE It

Hi! I found your story yesterday... and I must tell you that I couldn't stop reading LOL
It's excellent and well written. The characters are so real!
I can't wait for another Jack and elizabeth hot encounter LOL

I know that you have the story already, but I would love to give you some ideas for inspiration.
I will like to see jack more jelouse and acting on it.. even though he always tend to avoid issues.
It will be fun to see these two in a situation of danger, or maybe as prissiones, but still mad at each other
and, I think Jack has to win elizabeth heart, because I feel that he has been very passive in that matter, and I hope Elizabeth won't put it that easily to him. He has to work harder. He has to fight for her, not only against Will, but also against her too
and also to see elizabeth more harsh and cruel... he deserves it.. and also please don't break Will heart.. I think maybe you can find him another woman, so he dump ellizabeth instead

I hope you don't mind that I'm telling you this, they are just silly sugestions. You are an excellent writter, and I will like to continue reading your work.

Keep the good work!! I'm a Fan ;)

Ooooooo, I like. Reminds me of the scene in pergatory when he reveals that Lizzie killed him. OUCH.

omg!! i nearly jumped out of my seat when i saw that you had updated! omg i cant wait to see what happens next..she is dumb for blaming all this on jack...when its her fault in the first place...and jack even warned her....god i just want to strangle her right now..but u must update! you must lol a week from now..i can handle that

I loved it, loved it, loved it! But like alot of your chapters Im in tears again. You have a way of making you cry, I love your story so much. It pains me to wait for your next chapter lol. Im begging you, really, please please please let Jack and Elizabeth make up!?!?!? That was a pretty heated argument and both said some nasty things but thats because they're both hurting and are both upset. Is Will gonna find out? Whats gonna happen? I just NEED them to end up together, I didn't get my sparrabeth ending in AWE I atleast need it in your amazing fanfict!
Again, brilliant writing, amazingly heartbreaking!
Keep writing
x x x x

wonderful as usual. my only wish is that you updated more requently, but I'm sure you have a life, unlike me :)

OMg i really love this story, i just started reading it a couple days ago, and im now finished, i cant wait to read the next chapter, and i lve the risk to shag again, love that to, cant wait to read more. peace.

YAY!!! Couldnt believe you updated, you made my day :] Loved the chapter, I was hoping the girl was Lizabeth but yeah...:P I wonder who it is ;] I want her and Jack to talk or shout or interact haha I love their arguing/conversations. Keep writing, I love your story. I want to see how/if they work it out.
BTW do you prefer comments on here or email reviews? Just curious
xxxx

what goes around - comes around...
don't you agree?
Wonderful chapter - thx mate,
~jacks_peapod~